求牛人英语改错~求英语牛人帮忙把下面这段话改错一下~语法错误~感谢~
个人改法（暂时只涉及语法改正）如下！
I am sorry (to not改成not to：不定式的否定是在to前面加上not) invite you to travel around my hometown for your busy trip.
I know you've traveled (加入to) some famous (interests改成places of interest), but there is also something interesting you've never experienced. If you were free next vacation and would like to go traveling again, I (will改成would，对应从句的虚拟语气) be your guide with pleasure! Something more beautiful and more delicious is waiting for you!
如果对你有所帮助，请点击我回答下面的“选为满意回答”按钮，谢谢！
According to the deep analyse of the poster 用错字，analyse 是动词 应用analysis
所以 deep analyse 应改为 in depth analysis (深入的分析)
there are more details will be shown in the appendix 2.
改为: more details will be shown in the appendix 2.
或可: there will be more details shown in the appendix 2.
This article is designed to ....
第一句：This article is designed to analyse and discuss an example (an instance也可,后面才知道你讲的是哪个例子，这里要泛指用不定冠词） using（through是通过，你想表达通过什么方法，用using或via） colour theories and applications.
As why I choose this movie poster, there are several reasons as follow.语法错（前有why后有reason，这两个词不一起使用在一个句子中的）
The reasons that I choose this movie poster are as follow
there are lots of theories and applications to show in this poster
在海报展现出很多理论，理论是被show出来的，用被动，或索性不用to show也行
In this article, the range of the colour will be identified and, in the second part, the poster will be deeply analysis and discussion based on the colour theory and functional.
想表达什么，混乱，语法错很多哦
要知道你的意思再改
另外，是不是没有完结，因为只有firstly，后面的secondly, thirdly呢？
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