求高人帮忙写一篇英语作文,急用的,哪位英语好的一定帮帮忙~~谢谢啦

求高人来帮我写一篇英语作文,现在非常急用呢。在线等。。。~

Once i entered this school, i was filled with happiness and excitement. At the beginning, i thought that my life will be brilliant in my new school. After one year life in senior, i totally changed my idea about life here. Since we have a lot classes everyday, i have no enough time to plan my own life. In order to get high points, i have to study very hard in daily life. I spent most of my time in doing my homewrk and preparing for different exams.Because of heavy study work,i always slept very late. Although i faced difficulties, i am confident in my future life. I will do my best to overcome problems and succeed in senior.

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  【试题回放】假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机,因有质量问题,要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件。
  要点:1. 问题:手机不响铃,不能发短信;该产品已售完,无法更换;型号新,无配件,无法维修。 2. 要求:公司应尽快予以更换。
  注意:1. 词数为100左右;
  2. 参考词汇:配件-- spare part;
  3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);
  4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。

  Dear Sir,
  I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.

  Thank you for your consideration.
  Sincerely yours,
  Bu Manyi

  【名师点评】
  本文内容要点齐全,语言丰富,结构合理,如头两句说明了购买手机后发现故障的情况,中间部分说明了无法维修而必须让公司更换手机的原委,最后明确提出自己的要求,明白流畅,将题目所提出的要点全部表达清楚,较好的完成了任务。全文以一般过去时为基调,结合主动语态与被动语态,并使用了so, but, therefore 等连接词,使文章结构完整严密。固定短语,如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用,使文章的语言显得地道而精炼。

15 May, 2010

Dear classmates,

  Oh behalf of the University Students' Union, I, the Chairman of the Union , am earnestly calling for yo ur active participation in our environmental protection campai gn. It is the duty of every global villager; man just can not sustain his glorious c i vilization without a rewarding environment, which will be possible only if man makes considerable efforts to protect the environment.

Do you cherish precio us opportunities to volunteer in our joint efforts in environmental protection? Here is a great one not to be missed by any enthusiastic youth; Right next Saturday, our university is to run a publicity campaign to advocate environmental protection across the city. The University Students' Union will be in charge of recruitment of volunteers. Let's join our h ands and take action immediately.

Yours incerely,

Li Hua

Univers

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