我是一个初一的学生，我写了三篇英语作文，请各位大神帮忙找一下错。
第二行开头，最好改成I am a boy，即去掉Chinese。你这样说不地道......
2.第二行末尾，应该是let me tell you something about my family.在这里不能用tell to。
3.第四行第一句话去掉。small family不地道......直接就第二句话就行。
4.第二段第二行，My parents have gray hair。
就这么几个错误了。文章写得不错。
Everyone has a room. I have a room too. Now, let me tell you about my room.
My room is a small one. There is a desk,a bed and a wardrobe. I have lots of books, they are in the bookshelf of the desk. Under the bed, I have two cabinets. All my toys are in these cabinets.
This is my room. What about you?
Lost:My book
I lost my book. The book is green and topic of the book is Survive. I’m very sad, because the book is the homework of winter vacation. I must find it. If you find it, please call me. My telephone number is 123456789. Thank you for your help.
×××
Found: At school
I found a green schoolbag. The schoolbag is small. There is a pencil and a book in the schoolbag. The pencil is green and the book is green too. If these things are yours,you can call me at 12346789.
×××
小同学，三篇文章写的总体很好！ 思路很清晰，就是有个别小问题，我已经在不破坏原意的基础上改正了！
语法点： there be 句型后如果跟两个或两个以上的名词短语，遵循就近原则。
e.g. There are three apples,one orange and two bananas.
There is one orange,three apples and two bananas.
For eating, I have some healthy eating habits. I like eating noodles for breakfast because I think they are delicious. I don’t like cracker because I don’t think they’re clean. For lunch and dinner, I want to have food at home. I don’t want to eat fast food because I think it’s bad for my health.
Then, I want to tell you about my sports habits. I like playing ping-pong because it is easy for me.But I think playing basketball is too difficult to I don’t want to play basketball.
These are my likes and dislikes. How about you?
I have lots of teacher and my favorite one is Ms.Tian.
Ms.Tian is my history teacher. She teaches well and she always kind to us. She usually tell us some useful stories. So I think her lesson is interesting and she is a good teacher.
Do you want to buy some beautiful clothes? Do you want to buy fresh food? Do you want to buy useful books? Now, you can go to the Xinhua Store and buy your needs
For clothes,the primary price of the black is 1000 yuan, but the price of the black sweater is100 yuan now! All socks are on sale, two pairs is only 1 yuan. For food, we have cheap fruit. A kilo of bananas is 2 yuan and 2 kilos of bananas are 3 yuan. For books, we gave English-Chinese dictionaries for 30 yuan and they are too useful for your study.
Let’s buy our needs at Xinhua Store now! Come on!
第一篇第一个单词Everyone更合适一点
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二篇第二行应为She always tells us...,第三行Her classes are ...
第三篇第四行two pairs are
Everyone/Everybody has different likes and dislikes。 every只有每个的意思。
Everyone/Everybody has different likes and dislikes。 every只有每个的意思。
She usually tell to us some useful stories. tell后面加s
I have lots of teacher teacher后面加s
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