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Forwarding mail
1、读音：英 [ˈfɔːwədɪŋ meɪl] 美 [ˈfɔːrwərdɪŋ meɪl]
2、释义：转发邮件。
3、语法：意思是“发送”“转寄”，尤指“转发”，其对象可以是信件、包裹，可以是货物等，有时也可表示“前进”“放在前面”，即把事物推向前进，一般译为“促进”。
4、例句：There was a long lag in forwarding mail to us. 转寄给我们的邮件晚了很久才拿到。
扩展资料
同根词组：free mail
1、读音：英 [friː meɪl] 美 [friː meɪl]
2、释义：免费邮件。
3、语法：free作“免费的，无偿的”“空闲的，不忙的”解时，无比较级和最高级形式。free作“摆脱…的，不受…影响的”“大方的，慷慨的”解时，只用作表语。
4、例句：No free newspapers or junk mail请勿发送免费报纸或垃圾邮件。
还有一些小的语法错误，比如说 Everyday I have to discuss with the foreigh teacher what we learn today , and how to teach it ，“teacher” 最好是复数，然后teach 后面的“it”可以省略的。
I’m good at getting along with the other people."the"是要省略的。
and I can adopt ，应该是adapt，adapt是适应的意思，adopt是领养的意思这句我觉着可以说and I can adapt to the new environment soon and accept new things quickly.
need to do sth. 而不是need doing sth.
And then I should talk with their parent about them what the learn and how they feel.这一句，应该是parents，后面的应该是你手误了吧，"about what they learn and how they feel"
have confidence in sb. 而不是 on 或者可以用be confident in ，就是最好不要过多的用相同的词组或者是单词。
最后还有一点，在比较正式的英文书写中，最好不要出现省略形式，比如说 I'm '最好是写 I am之类的，这是我们外教说的。祝申请顺利！
and I can adopt the new envirremetn and learn new things quickly.
can后面应该用原型adapt 还有 环境 是environment
Everyday I have to discuss with the foreigh teacher what we ()learn today
have to去掉 ()加个have
And then I should talk with their parent about them ()what the learn and how they feel
这句话你想说的是什么意思?
()处应该加个like把
····等等等
第一段，i am太多了。用点复杂长句全概括了。outgoing 最好用easy going这样把后边话的意思也包括了。
‘My name is Jane Hu,21 years old man,who is from Hunan province.I am an easy going and active man.......’
总的来说挺不专业的，需要高手指点。
我怎么感觉中文思维有点浓？不过，总体来说，还是不错的
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