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今天开始第二天的实习
Today is the second day of my intetnship.
早上我和我的educator带了孩子们去外面散步并且去公园玩
In the morning, my educator and I took the kids for a walk and play in the park.
孩子们都超高兴的
They are all super exciting and happy! （不用改）
而且我发现孩子们都超容易满足和超容易兴奋的
I found that the kids are all easily to get satisfied and easily excited.
他们看到大货车经过或看到动物时,都会超兴奋的尖叫
When they see the trucks passing by or see the animal, they all are exciting and then screaming!
对孩子们而言 这些事都是很新鲜很有趣的
For them, everything is very new and interesting.
後来我们去公园玩 孩子们都非常开心
We went to the park later , and children are very happy.
因为他们可以去玩平常在教室里面玩不到的游乐设施
Because they can play something they can't usually play in the classroom.
例如荡秋千; 孩子们都争先恐後的抢著要玩呢
For example, kids can't wait to play the swing.
当然为了安全起见 我们都在旁边陪著以及监督他们玩
我认为花时间陪孩子们玩是件非常重要的事, 因为通过这样的交流
我们可以和孩子建立一个非常有意义,有互动的的关系
For safety reasons, we have to stay with them and supervise while they are playing. I believe spending time to play with children is very important and meaningful, because an interactive relationship can be built with each other through these communications.
後来外面之後我们就返回教室准备吃午餐了
下午我们做了一个science活动
班上来了一个男老师 他带了材料过来 教孩子们做小猪形状的面包
孩子们自己亲手做,亲手捏造属於他们自己的小猪形状的面包
後来放进烤箱烤完之後,老师发给孩子们吃
孩子们都吃的津津有味
We went back to church after walking and playing outside, and get ready for lunch.
We had an activity related to science in the afternoon.
There comes a male teacher, who brought ingredients to our class and teach kids to bake pig-shape bread.
After many times of trying, kids can finally make their own pig-shape bread by hand.
After bake them in the oven, teachers gave the baked bread to kids for eating, and they all like them.
这个活动不但训练了孩子们的创造力
也给孩子们很大的成就感,吃著自己做的面包
真的是个很棒的活动
This activity has not just train kids' creativity, but they also receive feeling of great success after eating their hand-make bread. That activity is very good!
(下面没有中文原文，我只修改)
This is a great activities for children, and also a good experience for me in two days of internship.
Children are actually very smart and have their own thoughts.
Being an educator or parents, we should be patient and spend more time to teach them.
They can do much more things than we can imagine.
They have enough capacity to do many different things
for example， they changed their own shoes and made their own bed or clean the foods etc. Those things are what i observe during my intern.
We didn't take the children out to walk or to the park due to the rain. We spent the whole morning in the classroom. The teacher kept the children interest and not to make them bored by telling story and doing circle time with them. Rainy day could make children very depressed; we therefore had to shift their attention onother things. A dancing teacher was brought in to teach the children how to dance. The dancing teacher played out her own music and they all danced together happily. Seeing the children happy, I am happy too.
I joined in the dance with them as well as holding their hands in the dancing circle. The feeling of hands holding with these children makes me very excited and cheerful. I hope I could have this kind of dancing experience with children a lot more in the future.
It was free time in the afternoon. I saw a child in the class pushed and hit another child. I immediately pull the troubled child aside and told him/her that pushing or hitting others are bad behaviour. Instead, we should be gentle and nice. Later, my teacher said to me that I had done a good job. However, I could have been more straight forward to explain to the troubled child that pushing and hitting is not right and should let him/her know the consequence of pushing and hitting others. I should show him/her the injury caused by pushing and hitting so that he/she would know that those behaviours can cause pain to others. Besides, I should keep the troubled child to have eye contact with me in a way that he/she would know I took this matter very seriously.
I'm very thankful for the suggestion and guidance that my teacher gave me. The information is very useful. From now on, I would know how to handle this kind of situation in the future. Today, I learned a big and profitable lesson.
今天总算没有下雨了,又是大晴天了 因为天气的允许
於是早上我和我的老师就带著孩子们出去外面散步以及去公园玩
孩子们一样在公园玩得特别开心
there is no rainning today, is a sunny day today, because the weather allow
so me and my teacher bring children to outside for walk and go to the park to play
they are very happy to play in the park
因为可能早上在公园玩得很累 所以後来中午午觉时间
孩子们都睡得很熟 并且也都很快就入睡了
看他们睡得这麼舒服 不知道为什麼 我感到很幸福
因为看到它们可爱的睡颜 感觉压力什麼的都会不见
真是令人让人感到愉悦
Because it may play in the park in the morning so tired afterwards noon nap time
The kids are fast asleep and also quickly fell asleep
To see if they sleep so comfortable I do not know why I am very happy
Because they see cute sleeping face of what will be feeling the pressure but not
It is really make people feel pleasure
时间过得很快 一下子实习快要迈向第三周了
经过这两个礼拜 每个礼拜三天的实习
孩子们也都很熟悉和我相处了
我发现有个孩子特别黏我 特别爱跟我撒娇
每次孩子们都围绕著老师在听故事或唱歌时
Time flies suddenly going towards the third week of practice
After two weeks of practice three days each week
The children are very familiar with and I get along
I found a stick I especially love children especially with my baby
Every time the kids are listening to the story revolves around a teacher or sing
这个孩子都会跑来坐在我身上,倚靠在我身上
有时候也会跑过来抱我或者叫我抱抱她
真是个可爱的孩子
还有每次他在玩的时候 他都会重复不停一直叫我的名字
真是让我觉得很有趣又很好笑
The children will run to sit on me, lean on me
Sometimes ran to hug me or call me hug her
What a lovely child
There he will repeat every time he has been kept in play when called my name
Really made me feel very interesting and very funny
和这个孩子相处 真是让我觉得很舒服
但我觉得以後当我实习结束要离开时
我会觉得特别难过 因为再也看不到这个孩子了
And the children get along really made me feel very comfortable
But I think when you later when I have to leave the internship
I feel particularly sad because never see this child
Today, it finally stopped raining. A nice weather like this sunny day allowed us to take the children out for a walk in the park. All the children played happily and had a great time in the park.
After a busy morning activities in the park, the children all fell into sleep quickly in the afternoon nap times. I can see that they were all tired. Watching their beautiful and peaceful sleep make me has a good soothing feeling. That feeling not only brought me happiness but also took away my stress. I felt relieved and delighted.
Times passes quickly and now I'm in my third week of internship. I had been with these children three days a week for two weeks already. These young children had got familiar with my presence. I realized that there was a kid among them particularly wanted my affection. He often stayed and leaned towards me during the story time and the circle time. Sometimes he would come to hug me or asked me to give him a lift. He is such an adorable boy. He often called and repeated my name few times when he was playing. His behaviour is amusing and interesting. I feel comfortable with his companionship. However, at the same time, I am worried about the sadness of leaving him at the end of my internship.
It stops raining and finally shows sunshinetoday. Due to the great weather, my teacher and I take children to walk outsidein the morning and they still can find lots of fun even in the park.
Probably they are pretty tired afterplaying in the whole morning, children get asleep very fast and deeply during theirafternoon nap. Somehow, I feel extremely happy seeing them sleeping socomfortably. It is delightful that thesecute sleeping faces can blow pressure or other bad feelings away.
Time flies so fast that I don’t realize thethird week of my internship is starting. Children get familiar with megradually after the first two-week getting along, three days each week. One ofthem especially likes me and loves to act like a spoiled child to gain my attention.
When others are listening to stories orsinging around the teacher, he will come to me then lean against me or ask formy hugs sometimes. Moreover, he likes to call my name repeatedly when he isenjoying himself, which is both interesting and funny. What a lovely kid!
Getting along with thischild brings me so much comfort. I am particularly sad when it is time to leavefinishing the internship, because I won’t see him any more
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